Chapter 1
“Alice, do
you even realize
your
mistake?”
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Alice’s mouth and nose were submerged in water, choking her throat painfully. As she opened her from the brink of death, she saw her second brother, Noah, on the poolside, along with her fourth brother, Caleb, who was holding Chloe in his arms.
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A flicker of shock crossed her eyes; this scene felt all too familiar. Had she not died? Was she somehow reborn on the day three years ago when Chloe was officially adopted by the her family as a foster daughter?
The memory came flooding back: At the banquet, Chloe had deliberately schemed against her, making everyone believe she had pushed Chloe into the water on purpose. Caleb had been the first to notice them, but he only saved Chloe, leaving Alice, who couldn’t swim, to struggle on her own in the water. And then, Noah was pressing Alice to admit her fault, implying that if she didn’t, he wouldn’t save her.
Desperately, she struggled in the water, begging for forgiveness, pleading with her brothers to rescue her. It was only at the point of near death that she was finally pulled out.
From that moment on, she dared not provoke Chloe again, carefully trying to please her brothers at home, but what did she ultimately gain?
Chloe stole Alice’s thesis, and Noah testified for Chloe, branding Alice a plagiarist and getting her expelled.
When Chloe needed a kidney transplant due to her poor health, Alice’s third brother, Alex, personally took Alice to the operating room to give Chloe a kidney.
When Chloe needed to boost her international competition results, her other brothers—the forth brother Caleb, the fifth brother Finn, and the sixth brother Luke–had unceremoniously kicked Alice off the team.
Alice discovered evidence of Chloe’s plagiarism and forged medical records and brought it to her eldest brother, hoping to expose Chloe’s true nature.
But instead, she stirred up public outrage; no one believed her, and they didn’t even bother to look at the evidence closely.
Eldest brother Ethan kicked her out of the house to reflect on her actions. She found herself homeless, penniless, and suffering greatly.
As memories flooded back, Alice gave up struggling and sank directly to the bottom of the pool. She opened her eyes wide, her expression blank, as if she had already died. She watched her brothers gathered around Chloe on the shore, and even seeing it again, her heart still ached with piercing pain.
How ridiculous.
She,
as
their biological
sister,
couldn’t
even
compare
with an
outsider.
On the deck, Noah had been entirely focused on Chloe, and only when he no longer heard Alice’s struggles did he turn to look at the pool–Alice had already sunk to the bottom. Upon seeing this, Noah’s face turned pale:“Alice!”
Without a second thought, he jumped into the water.
When Chloe saw Alice sink, a glimmer of delight flashed in her eyes; it would be better if Alice
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died. She feigned weakness, tugging at fourth brother Caleb’s sleeve, saying weakly, “Caleb… I want to save Alice, too. She fell into the water because of me.”
Caleb, who had been worried, quickly reassured Chloe, “Don’t be ridiculous. Noah’s got it. Alice’s just reaping what she sowed. She won’t die!” He turned his gaze back to the pool, his expression complex.
that Underwater, Alice saw Noah swimming towards her, his face etched with worry, a worry seemed genuine. Just moments ago, he had been forcing her to admit her fault, coldly observing her struggle in the water.
This time, she didn’t care for his rescue. A hint of sarcasm flickered in Alice’s eyes as she turned and swam away from the surface.
After the drowning incident in her past life, Noah had forced her to learn swimming with Chloe. She had already been left with a trauma, but to please Noah, she had pushed through her fear and learned to swim, but Noah only praised Chloe’s bravery, ignoring Alice’s silent struggle. Little did he know, that minute Alice was intentionally left in the water had left her with severe aftereffects.
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were only for Chloe. But
cared about her well–being; Noah’s eyes “Alice, what’s this charade? Do you think pretending to drown will erase the mistake you just made?” Noah blocked her path, feeling that Alice seemed to have changed significantly. When did she learn to swim?
Alice looked up at Noah, who had once been her favorite. Her older brother, Ethan, had always been strict, but Noah had been a little bit kinder to her. Now, however, Noah’s eyes were filled with disgust and impatience.
Chloe’s soft voice cut through the air.“Noah, it’s not Alice’s fault. I know she never liked me joining the family. it was my greed that led me to hope for family. Please don’t argue because of me; you’re all so important to me…”

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The readers' comments on the novel: Six Brothers Plea for Forgiveness (Alice)
This story is incomplete!!! You get us into the story then you leave us with a cliff hanger. Plus there's so many errors. It is obvious that English is second ( or 3rd) language. Author has mixed up names on several characters. Mixed up he/she , him/her. Made story too long by repetitive sentences. Made it look like the reader wasnt able to retain parts of the story by repeating certain aspects. I know authors do that but this author did it too often. This story lets you see what an eye for an eye would mean to some cultures. Needs MAJOR proof reading. Pro: great family drama. The one emotion you feel the most in this story is anger & discuss. There are a few funny (actually hilarious) parts in there. You want the good guy to win even though he may been at fault for something. You want justice for Alice and you want to see her independent from her brothers totally. I feel the author is on the right track but just needs to clean it up....
Except Alice's and Jack's names, all other names are mixed. And why there is LUKE'S FATHER instead of EATHEN...
I want yo ask that wht Alice's surname is keep on changing from Wolsh to Windham to Lu???? And Andrew to Garett? And Jane's name to Chloe as well...